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FA OC Tsubaki Raiken

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Name: Tsubaki Raiken

Nickname/Alias: ThunderBird

Age: 21

DOB: May 1

Blood Type: b

Height: 5'4

Weight: 150

Build: Slim, curvy

Series(if any): Fortune Academy

Clothes: Gray sleeveless shirt, with scarf. Black pants with white trimming. Dark gray arm guards and fingerless gloves. Geta with orange strings. Green sash, with silver lining.

Hair color & style: Dark blue. In ponytail.

Eye color: Violet

Skin color: Tan

Background: For centuries, the members of the Raiken family has always served the god of Raikou island,Raikotsu and his family. When Hanamaru was born,Tsubaki and her brother Kai were given the task to protect Hanamaru with their lives; just as previous generations had done. When it was revealed that Hana was leaving Raikou Island to attend Fortune Academy, Tsubaki and Kai followed suit.

Personality: Tsubaki is usually portrayed as being stern and serious most of time. She is dedicated to her mission to watch and protect Hanamaru. She is very protective of the demi-god, usually keeping people away from Hanamaru in an attempt to use his power for their own ends. She is also short-tempered and can get easily relied up. Tsubaki is extremely loyal to the house of Raikou,willing to put her life at risk in order to protect them. While she is a stern and serious warrior on the outside, in she is very distant from people. She apparently suffers from low self-esteem. This stems from the fact that, as a child, she always felt inferior to her older brother, Kai, who was supposedly the future head of the Clan. Her parents would praise Kai's accomplishments, but barely mention hers.

Power& Abilities: As a member of the Raiken clan,Tsubaki's control of lightning magic is second only by the house of Raikou members. She is able to use lightning in every way imaginable. She can fire it as a beam or in a wave-like motion (it's usually in the shape of a claw or a bird head) can creates constructs (such as shields, barriers, spheres, and even golems) She is also capable of channeling lightning through her weapon, Squall wing, to inflict extra damage. Tsubaki is a highly skilled hand-to-hand combatant; her fighting style consists of very powerful kicks; her kicks have been shown to be strong enough to shatter stone. Tsubaki utilizes a great deal of agility to dodge and sway opponents' attacks; able to parry and counter attacks effortlessly.  Like most lighting users, Tsubaki is vulnerable to water magic. Coming in contact with it will weaken (or possibly) strip her of her Lightning magic.

Weapons (if any):  Two steel fans named "Squall Wing"

Home town: Raikou Island

Race: Human

Gender: Female

Nationality: Neova

Orientation: Not outright stated, but implied to be Bi

Tattoos or scars: None

Allegiance (Good, Evil, or Neutral): Good

Unusual features:  Purple eyes

Occupation: Guardian of Hanamaru

Hobbies: Reading Horror novels, oil painting.

Likes: Cats, strawberry short cake, Tofu ,fine art, opera

Dislikes: Dogs, any type of chocolate, beefsteak, modern music

Family: Raiken clan, Kai(Brother)

Character relationships:  Hanamaru( Master) House of Raikou(Serves)

Preferred seiyu:  Yoko Hikasa

Preferred Voice actor: Colleen Clinkenbeard

Theme song: Who I am/Reflection
Stats:

Strength: 5

Speed:6

Agility: 7

Durability: 3

Intelligence: 8

Overall: 29

Personal quote:  "I…I am…worthless."
HOLY SHIT! MY FIRST DEVIAION IN MONTHS!!!

WHAT IS AIR!? OMG!!!

That aside,sorry it took forever for me to upload something. I have been wasting spending my time on Tumblr and Persona 4: Golden.

So,here is another OC,for my bro,:iconsharingan-shinobi:'s Story.

I made the image with Tektek.

Tsubaki is owned by me.

FA is owned by SS.

EDIT:Fixed some spelling else pointed out by :iconshootingstar429:

EDIT 2: New preview pic. Art provided by :iconlayerth: Another awesome artist you should follow.
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I agree wholeheartedly with Scarlet: this is a very well thought out and detailed character. I think the only part that COULD be considered clinched would be her inferiority complex, some people might say it has been overdone, however I, personally, think it's fine because it is quite typical for younger siblings to this way.
Other than that you have a few spelling errors. You said "she apparently SURFERS from low self-esteem. This STERNS from the fact..." You meant suffers and stems. You also had a tense error, "Squall wing, to INFLICTED extra damage." The proper tense is inflict. These are easy for spell check to miss, so it's not a big deal (I'm using my kindle to type this, and it doesn't have a spellcheck so please excuse any errors from me).
Everything I've mentioned is pretty small, so I think you've done a great job. I really like your character and now I'm really interested in your brother's story.